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2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作训练题(16)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Goods Promotion on Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

假设你是李慧,就校园内推销各种商品的情况给校长写封信,信的内容应包括:

1. 校园内经常见到推销各种商品的现象

2. 产生这种现象的原因

3. 你的具体建议

【范文】

A Letter to the University President

about the Goods Promotion on CampusApril 21, 2006

Dear Mr. President,

Nowadays the goods promotion on campus is on the rise. When you are taking a nap on the dormitory, you will be disturbed by knocks on the door by a salesman. Most of those goods promoted are of poor quality. Worse still, this poses a potential danger on the security of the dormitory.

Why is the goods promotion so pervasive on campus? Firstly, many salesmen believe that college students are naive and can be easily deceived. Secondly, a number of students, especially the freshmen, are in great need of various necessities at the beginning of each semester. Thirdly, some students want to take parttime jobs and earn some money.

As for this kind of phenomenon, Id like to put forward some suggestions. On the one hand, those professional salesmen should not be allowed to enter the dormitory to promote their goods. On the other hand, no promotion activity should be allowed during noon break. I hope in this way our campus life will be left undisturbed.

Yours,

Li Hui

2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作训练题(15)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter of Application for a School Loan. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

假设你是高鹏,是英语系的一名新生,请你就申请助学贷款一事给学校有关部门写封申请信。申请信的内容须包括以下几点:

1. 提出申请

2. 申请的理由

3. 恳请批准

【范文】

A Letter of Application for a School Loan

To whom it may concern,

Im writing to you to apply for a school loan. As a freshman from the English Department, I have much financial difficulty in continuing my study.

There are five members in my family. My father is the only breadwinner of the whole family while my mother was laid off two years ago. My grandmother has been suffering a chronic illness for more than five years. My younger brother is now studying in a high middle school. I took parttime jobs during the summer vacation, but what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees. In order to continue my study, I have to apply for a school loan.

If my request is granted, I will make good use of the money and put my heart into study. I will definitely pay back the loan according to the requirements. I hope that you will consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Gao Peng

2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作训练题(14)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Deal with Cheating? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 学生作弊的方式多种多样

2. 作弊的原因,对作弊学生应如何处理

3. 怎样杜绝作弊

【范文】

How to Deal with Cheating?

Many students tend to cheat in the exams. Some will copy the answers from their books. Some will talk with each other to share the right answers. Besides, some even write down the information on their skin.

There are several causes leading to cheating. Some students want to get high scores without efforts. Secondly, some are under great pressure and they fear to fail the exams. Once the students are found cheating, the teachers should punish them severely and explain the harm of cheating to them.

There are at least two ways to eliminate cheating. On the one hand, we should explain the harm of cheating to our students. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken against cheating. As a result, the fair play in the exams can be achieved and students can pay attention to study instead of cheating.

2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作训练题(13)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a good friend John, congratulating him on his admission to a famous university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 对朋友进入大学表示祝贺

2. 介绍大学生活和中学生活的异同

3. 对如何成功地过好大学生活提出自己的建议

【范文】

A Congratulation Letter

June 16, 2006

Dear John,

Im very glad to hear that you have passed the entrance examination and been accepted by a very famous university. I feel very proud of you and I believe you really deserve the honor since you have been working so hard.

As you have mentioned in the letter, there are both some similarities and differences between the college life and the life in high school. On the one hand, you have to go on working hard as there are a lot of subjects for you to learn. On the other hand, in high school, teachers will probably tell you what to learn and how to learn in details and will also monitor your learning performance, while in college, teachers work like tour guides and you have to find out your own way to acquire knowledge and solve problems.

For you, I think to be optimistic is very important. If you hope to adapt yourself to the new environment, youd better be positive no matter what difficulties you will experience in your college life. May you adapt yourself to the college life as soon as possible!

Truly Yours,

Carl

2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(3)

文章是由三个主要部分组成的:开头、扩展部分、结尾。常用的文 章发展方法有以下几种:

2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(3)

2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(3)

2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(2)

第二章 写作透析——高分作文秘诀

一、临场应试技巧

1.字迹。可以不漂亮,但是必须工整。

2.字数。150字最佳。四级要求至少写120字,但是只写120字,每段平均只有40字,显得太少。有的同学写200甚至300字,又太繁琐。

3.段落分布。一般写三段,而不要写成两段或者四段。另外,第一段大概写2~3句(如果每句话所含字数少的话,可以写4句,这个根据具体情况来定,后面段落同理);第二段写5句左右;第三段如果有重点内容则同样写4~5句,如果是总结性段落,写3句即可。

4.动手写个提纲,把主题句写出即可,理清自己的思路。第一段要写好,尤其是第一句话,一定不能出现语法错误。尽量使用事先准备好的套话,并学会随机应变,针对不同的题目要求来替换。来源:www.examda.com

5.留出2~3分钟检查。有没有错词或病句;标点符号是否齐全、准确;每一句话是否符合英语的思维习惯,避免语法错误。另外,修改时要注意卷面整洁。

二、高分作文妙招

(一)结构清晰

1.篇章组织

文章是由三个主要部分组成的:开头、扩展部分、结尾。常用的文章发展方法有:列举法、举例法、因果法、比较对照法、分类法、定义法、时间顺序法和空间顺序法。

(1)列举法

列举法是指将数种因素一一列出,如原因、症状、优点、缺点、变化、特点等。常用于列举法的过渡连词有:

① to begin with…, secondly…, besides…, lastly….

② for one thing…, for another…, finally….

③ first…, second…, third…, moreover….

(2)举例法

举例法是通过典型事例对主题进行说明。一般说来,所举的例子要具体,有说服力,有助于说明主题句中的支配思想。常用于举例的词语有:to illustrate, an illustration/an example, for example/for instance, particularly/in particular, such as, like等。

注意列举法和举例法的区别:列举法侧重一一罗列事实,所列事实力求全面。举例法则是通过典型事例解释作者的观点,事例可多可少。

(3)因果关系法

人们在思维活动中,常常由原因推导其结果,或由结果分析其原因,写作中的因果法就是这种思维方式的体现。通常因果法有以下两种模式:

①原因分析型:在主题句中先介绍某一事实或结果,然后对这一事实或结果的原因进行分析。

②结果分析型:在主题句中先点明要讨论的事件或事实,然后分析已经或将要发生的结果。

表示结果的常用词和短语有 therefore, as a result, accordingly, consequently, contribute to, for this reason, lead to, result in 等。

表示原因的常用词和短语有 due to, because of, owing to, because, since, as, on account of, result from 等。

用原因结果分析写作的句式通常有:

① 基本原因,分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因。例如:

Why…? For one thing…For another…

The answer to this problem involves many factors.For one thing…For another…Still another…

A number of factors, both physical and psychological affect…/both individual and social contribute to…

The reasons for this are as follows…

We have good reason to believe that…

② 另一原因, 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要的。例如:

Another important factor is…

…is also responsible for the change/problem.

Certainly, the…is not the sole reason for…

③ 后果影响,分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响。例如:

It will produce a profound/farreaching effect/impact on…

It involves some serious consequence for…

(4)比较、对照法

比较、对照法是通过比较两个事物或一个事物的两个方面的相似点或不同点来支持主题句。比较是阐述所比对象的相同、类似方面;而对照则是阐述其不同甚至相反之处。

比较、对照的写作方法通常有以下两个模式:

① 先阐述甲方,再阐述乙方,即:甲1,甲2,甲3……乙1,乙2,乙3……

② 两方同时阐述,逐条比较,即:甲1,乙1;甲2,乙2;甲3,乙3; ……

常用来表达比较和对照的词语有:

① 比较相同点时常用的词语:like, same, in the same way, similar to, similarly…, both…and…, alike, neither…nor…, in common 等。

② 对照不同点时常用的词语:unlike, be different from, differ from, on the other hand, in contrast, while, instead, whereas 等。

比较、对照的写作句式通常有:

① 两者比较, 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点。例如:

The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.

Indeed, A carries much more weight when compared with B.

There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.

Compared with A, B…

② 两者相同/相似,比较两事物都有或者都没有的特点。例如:

A and B have several things in common.They are similar in that…

A bears some striking resemblance(s)to B.

(5)分类法

分类法是按一定标准对事物进行归类的一种段落发展方法。通过分类,使文章脉络一目了然。用分类法写作时,常用的词语有:

① to divide…into…, to classify…into…, to fall into, to distinguish 等;

② kinds, types, sorts, groups, categories 等;

③ according to, in terms of, depending on, on the basis of 等;

④ to sub-classify, to sub-categorize, to sub-divide 等。