2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(3)
时间: 2010-03-08 - 分类: 六级写作, 四六级写作 - 无评论

2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(2)
时间: 2010-03-08 - 分类: 六级写作, 四六级写作 - 无评论第二章 写作透析——高分作文秘诀
一、临场应试技巧
1.字迹。可以不漂亮,但是必须工整。
2.字数。150字最佳。四级要求至少写120字,但是只写120字,每段平均只有40字,显得太少。有的同学写200甚至300字,又太繁琐。
3.段落分布。一般写三段,而不要写成两段或者四段。另外,第一段大概写2~3句(如果每句话所含字数少的话,可以写4句,这个根据具体情况来定,后面段落同理);第二段写5句左右;第三段如果有重点内容则同样写4~5句,如果是总结性段落,写3句即可。
4.动手写个提纲,把主题句写出即可,理清自己的思路。第一段要写好,尤其是第一句话,一定不能出现语法错误。尽量使用事先准备好的套话,并学会随机应变,针对不同的题目要求来替换。来源:www.examda.com
5.留出2~3分钟检查。有没有错词或病句;标点符号是否齐全、准确;每一句话是否符合英语的思维习惯,避免语法错误。另外,修改时要注意卷面整洁。
二、高分作文妙招
(一)结构清晰
1.篇章组织
文章是由三个主要部分组成的:开头、扩展部分、结尾。常用的文章发展方法有:列举法、举例法、因果法、比较对照法、分类法、定义法、时间顺序法和空间顺序法。
(1)列举法
列举法是指将数种因素一一列出,如原因、症状、优点、缺点、变化、特点等。常用于列举法的过渡连词有:
① to begin with…, secondly…, besides…, lastly….
② for one thing…, for another…, finally….
③ first…, second…, third…, moreover….
(2)举例法
举例法是通过典型事例对主题进行说明。一般说来,所举的例子要具体,有说服力,有助于说明主题句中的支配思想。常用于举例的词语有:to illustrate, an illustration/an example, for example/for instance, particularly/in particular, such as, like等。
注意列举法和举例法的区别:列举法侧重一一罗列事实,所列事实力求全面。举例法则是通过典型事例解释作者的观点,事例可多可少。
(3)因果关系法
人们在思维活动中,常常由原因推导其结果,或由结果分析其原因,写作中的因果法就是这种思维方式的体现。通常因果法有以下两种模式:
①原因分析型:在主题句中先介绍某一事实或结果,然后对这一事实或结果的原因进行分析。
②结果分析型:在主题句中先点明要讨论的事件或事实,然后分析已经或将要发生的结果。
表示结果的常用词和短语有 therefore, as a result, accordingly, consequently, contribute to, for this reason, lead to, result in 等。
表示原因的常用词和短语有 due to, because of, owing to, because, since, as, on account of, result from 等。
用原因结果分析写作的句式通常有:
① 基本原因,分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因。例如:
Why…? For one thing…For another…
The answer to this problem involves many factors.For one thing…For another…Still another…
A number of factors, both physical and psychological affect…/both individual and social contribute to…
The reasons for this are as follows…
We have good reason to believe that…
② 另一原因, 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要的。例如:
Another important factor is…
…is also responsible for the change/problem.
Certainly, the…is not the sole reason for…
③ 后果影响,分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响。例如:
It will produce a profound/farreaching effect/impact on…
It involves some serious consequence for…
(4)比较、对照法
比较、对照法是通过比较两个事物或一个事物的两个方面的相似点或不同点来支持主题句。比较是阐述所比对象的相同、类似方面;而对照则是阐述其不同甚至相反之处。
比较、对照的写作方法通常有以下两个模式:
① 先阐述甲方,再阐述乙方,即:甲1,甲2,甲3……乙1,乙2,乙3……
② 两方同时阐述,逐条比较,即:甲1,乙1;甲2,乙2;甲3,乙3; ……
常用来表达比较和对照的词语有:
① 比较相同点时常用的词语:like, same, in the same way, similar to, similarly…, both…and…, alike, neither…nor…, in common 等。
② 对照不同点时常用的词语:unlike, be different from, differ from, on the other hand, in contrast, while, instead, whereas 等。
比较、对照的写作句式通常有:
① 两者比较, 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点。例如:
The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.
Indeed, A carries much more weight when compared with B.
There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.
Compared with A, B…
② 两者相同/相似,比较两事物都有或者都没有的特点。例如:
A and B have several things in common.They are similar in that…
A bears some striking resemblance(s)to B.
(5)分类法
分类法是按一定标准对事物进行归类的一种段落发展方法。通过分类,使文章脉络一目了然。用分类法写作时,常用的词语有:
① to divide…into…, to classify…into…, to fall into, to distinguish 等;
② kinds, types, sorts, groups, categories 等;
③ according to, in terms of, depending on, on the basis of 等;
④ to sub-classify, to sub-categorize, to sub-divide 等。
2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(1)
时间: 2010-03-03 - 分类: 六级写作, 四六级写作 - 无评论第一章 考试指南
一、近5年考题汇总
最新5年四级考试作文题目列表



二﹑命题趋势
1.根据上表四六级作文类型来看,对比选择类﹑现象解释类﹑问题解决类以及应用文类是四六级作文部分考查的重点,其中六级作文还要注意对观点论证类作文的复习。
2.四六级写作常见的题材主要有两类:一类是校园生活话题,包括学习﹑日常生活﹑工作及健康交际等。另一类是社会热点话题,考生对这类话题比较熟悉。
3.四六级作文体裁一般包括议论文﹑说明文和应用文写作(包括书信﹑便条﹑通知﹑海报等)。从近五年真题的趋势来看,议论文、说明文以及应用文仍然是四六级作文的考查重点。
4.根据历年真题和《考试大纲》规定,四六级写作命题形式主要有提纲作文﹑情景作文﹑提示作文﹑图表作文﹑关键词作文等。最常考的是提纲作文﹑情景作文以及图表作文。
2009年12月英语四六级考试写作模式及范文
时间: 2009-11-04 - 分类: 六级写作, 四六级写作 - 无评论What Attitude Should We Take to Sth. (批驳分析类)
1. 社会上对某事物的错误观念
2. 分析批驳其错误所在
3. 给出如何看待该事物的建议
写作模式(批驳分析类)
1) With the arrival / birth of …, sth. is becoming more and more … in our life. 2) Hit / Affected with this trend, some / many people come to believe / contend that …(错误观念) 3) But their viewpoint / belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.(作者的立场)
4) It is true that sth. is a key ingredient in one’s …(让步法分析) 5) On any scale of …, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than sth.. 6) If we see sth. in its true colors, however, it isnothing but… (批驳分析I) 7) … (进一步阐述)
And moreover, laying any undue stress on sth. may lead one to …, as can be easily seen in the cases of …(批驳分析II)
9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth. 10) On the one hand, … (正确看法I) 11) On the other, … (正确看法II) 12) In sum, sth. means …but not … to our life. (结论句)
Example: What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1.社会上对金钱的错误观念。
2.分析批驳其错误所在。
3.给出如何正确看待金钱的建议。
Reference model:
What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1) With the arrival of market-based economy, money is becoming more and more important in our life. 2) Hit with this trend, many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their life. 3) But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.
4) It is true that money is a key ingredient in one’s struggle towards happiness, without which, for example, there would be no way to go to college or form a family. 5) On any scale of one’s daily worry, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than money. 6) If we see it in its true colors, however, money is nothing but a means to an end. 7) Money can buy us food, but not appetite; medicine, but not health; diplomas, but not knowledge; and days of joy, but not the whole life of happiness.
And moreover, laying any undue stress on money may lead one to stop at nothing in making it, as can be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt officials.
9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards money. 10) On the one hand, money is vital to our daily life, in which case, it is wise of you to spend not where you may save. 11) On the other, money is something to be plowed into something more important, so it is better to spare not where you must spend. 12) In sum, money means something but not everything to our life.
Views on Something(各抒己见类)
1. 有人认为该事物······ 理由是······
2. 也有人认为该事物······
3. 我的看法
写作模式(各抒己见类)
1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth / appearance / arrival / development of sth.… 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to…(议论的主题) (Para. I)
3) Many / Some people contend / believe / argue that… (一方观点) 4) They base their contention / belief / argument on the grounds that… (理由I) 5)Besides, as they often point out, … (理由II) 6)Yet others react to the issue / matter the other way around and hold / assert that the opposite is just reasonable / more acceptable. (另一方观点) 7) From their angle of view, … (理由I)
And even worse, as they claim, … (理由II) (Para. II)
9) I am of / adhere to / stick to the opinion / view / truth that anything new, including…, can bring human society fortunes / merits / advantages or misfortunes / demerits / disadvantages, all depending on … (我的看法) 10) On the one hand, … (理由I) 11) But on the other, … (理由II) 12) In short, the key / solution to the problem is always controlled in … (结论句)
Views on Cloning
1. 有人认为克隆技术的应用利大于弊,理由是······
2. 也有人认为弊大于利,······
3. 我的看法。
Reference model:
Views on Cloning
1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly, as the first clone of an adult animal, has opened a new way of seeing the creation of life for the world. 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to whether cloning will bring fortunes or misfortunes to human society.
3) Many contend that the merits of cloning will outrun its demerits. 4) They base their contention on the grounds that cloning is the most effective method of saving the rare wild lives from dying out. 5) Besides, as they also point out, cloning can help provide better ways to treat some serious or deadly sicknesses, such as diabetes, and Parkinson’s disease. 6) Yet others react to the issue the other way around and hold that the opposite is just reasonable. 7) From their angle of view, cloning will threaten the ecological balance by destroying the natural reproduction through the enjoyment of sexual love between the male and the female.
And even worse, as they reveal, cloning will bring greater disasters to human society if it is used in creation of individuals with extreme genetic qualities, like terrorists, desperate scoundrels, and war manias.
9) I stick to the opinion that anything new, including cloning, can bring human society fortunes or misfortunes, all depending on how it is exploited. 10) On the one hand, it will be an inestimable blessing to the human world if it is applied to reproduction of best dairy cows or other choice domestic poultries. 11) But on the other hand, it will form a big threat to human society once it is abused in copying those hostile toward humanity. 12) In short, the solution to the problem is always within man’s reach.
My Way of Seeing Something (理由陈述类)
1. 人们从不同的角度看待某一事物
2. 我的看法是······(说明理由)
写作模式(理由陈述类)
1) Something may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as …while others may view it as …(人们的看法举例) 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as … (我的看法) (Para. I)
4) My insight into sth.(My outlook on sth. / My understanding of sth.) is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, sth. is so …that …(理由I) 6) …(进一步阐述) 7) Secondly, sth. is also … (理由II)
… (进一步阐述) 9) And most of all, …(理由III) 10) …(进一步阐述)
(Para. II)
11) I have (not) much freedom / option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing sth. more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of … in order to pave the way for … (Para. III)
My Way of Seeing Life
1. 人们从不同的角度看待人生
2. 我所推崇的看法是······(说明理由)
My Way of Seeing Life
1) Life may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as building up as much material wealth as possible while others may view it as enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers. 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as my sole chance to enrich myself with knowledge first, then to serve the society with all my heart, and finally to leave the world without any regrets.
4) My outlook on life is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, life is so wondrous that I am eager to explore it. 6) Set your heart on a mystery and you can find something new; attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success, all of which, however, depends on how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first. 7) Secondly, life is also short to any individual like me.
The flower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have come to cherish more is already on the wane. 9) And most of all, both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance. 10) Once I idle away the time I am supposed to grasp to study or work for the people, there will be no more hope of making up for it.
11) I have much option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing life more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of my college studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful and colorful life.
四十天突破六级考试写作讲义与笔记(5)
时间: 2009-11-02 - 分类: 六级写作, 四六级写作 - 无评论 同现举例
Cloze Test 3
Sleep is divided into periods of so-called REM sleep, characterized by rapid eye movements and dreaming, and longer periods of non-REM sleep. 41 kind of sleep is at all well-understood, but REM sleep is 42 to serve some restorative function of the brain. The purpose of non-REM sleep is even more 43 . The new experiments, such as these 44 for the first time at a recent meeting of the Society for Sleep Research in Minneapolis, suggest fascinating explanations 45 of non-REM sleep. 的美女编辑们
For example, it has long been known that total sleep 46 is 100 percent fatal to rats, yet, 47 examination of the dead bodies, the animals look completely normal. A research has now 48 the mystery of why the animals die. The rats 49 bacterial infections of the blood, 50 their immune systems-the self-protecting mechanism against diseases-had crashed.
41. [A] Either [B] Neither [C] Each [D] Any
42. [A] intended [B] required [C] assumed [D] inferred
43. [A] subtle [B] obvious [C] mysterious [D] doubtful
44. [A] maintained [B] described [C] settled [D] afforded
45. [A] in the light [B] by virtue [C] with the exception [D] for the purpose
46. [A] reduction [B] destruction [C] deprivation [D] restriction
47. [A] upon [B] by [C] through [D] with
48. [A] paid attention to [B] caught sight of [C] laid emphasis on [D] cast light on
49. [A] develop [B] produce [C] stimulate [D] induce
50. [A] if [B] as if [C] only if [D] if only
Cloze Test 5
Until recently most historians spoke very critically of the Industrial Revolution. They 41 that in the long run industrialization greatly raised the standard of living for the 42 man. But they insisted that its 43 results during the period from 1750 to 1850 were widespread poverty and misery for the 44 of the English population. 45 contrast, they saw in the preceding hundred years from 1650 to1750, when England was still a 46 agricultural country, a period of great abundance and prosperity.
The view, 47 , is generally thought to be wrong. Specialists 48 history and economics, have 49 two things: that the period from 1650 to 1750 was 50 by great poverty, and that industrialization certainly did not worsen and may have actually improved the conditions for the majority of the populace.
41. [A] admitted [B] believed [C] claimed [D] predicted
42. [A] plain [B] average [C] mean [D] normal
43. [A] momentary [B] prompt [C] instant [D] immediate
44. [A] bulk [B] host [C] gross [D] magnitude
45. [A] On [B] With [C] For [D] By
46. [A] broadly [B] thoroughly [C] generally [D] completely
47. [A] however [B] meanwhile [C] therefore [D] moreover
48. [A] at [B] in [C] about [D] for
49. [A] manifested [B] approved [C] shown [D] speculated
50. [A] noted [B] impressed [C] labeled [D] marked
四十天突破六级考试写作讲义与笔记(4)
时间: 2009-11-02 - 分类: 六级写作, 四六级写作 - 无评论 关联举例
Cloze Test 6
Industrial safety does not just happen. Companies 41 low accident rates plan their safety programs, work hard to organize them, and continue working to keep them42 and active. When the work is well done, a 43 of accident-free operations is established 44 time lost due to injuries is kept at a minimum.
Successful safety programs may 45 greatly in the emphasis placed on certain aspects of the program. Some place great emphasis on mechanical guarding. Others stress safe work practices by 46 rules or regulation. 47 others depend on an emotional appeal to the worker. But, there are certain basic ideas that must be used in every program if maximum results are to be obtained.
There can be no question about the value of a safety program. From a financial standpoint alone, safe 48 . The fewer the injury 49 , the better the workman’s insurance rate. This may mean the difference between operating at 50 or at a loss.
41. [A] at [B] in [C] on [D] with
42. [A] alive [B] vivid [C] mobile [D] diverse
43. [A] regulation [B] climate [C] circumstance [D] requirement
44. [A] where [B] how [C] what [D] unless
45. [A] alter [B] differ [C] shift [D] distinguish
46. [A] constituting [B] aggravating [C] observing [D] justifying
47. [A] Some [B] Many [C] Even [D] Still
48. [A] comes off [B] turns up [C] pays off [D] holds up
49. [A] claims [B] reports [C] declarations[D] proclamations
50. [A] an advantage [B] a benefit [C] an interest [D] a profit


